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Overall the crib for a campaign was positive,  our view is found that the phone we were serving had made improvements to phones on the current market that related to the brick concept we were given at the start of the brief they like the sleek looking advert that we are parodied from apples IPhone campaigns, and were very impressed by how photographers work with the posters that had sleek graphics and included hashtags they are often seen in modern advertising for social media. However we were critics for a sound which wasn't quite loud enough. In the future we now know it's a listen through through several channels rather than just earphones as always master of sound in Adobe audition after we are finished.