Script and Structure

After reviewing my sketchbook and and visiting the screenplay section of the pathway and exploratory stage  I looked back on much of the techniques and potential ideas so I decided not to go with when doing the project.  Many of these seemed interesting ideas that could be adapted to fit the revolutionary focus of my FMP.  The standout was a plan I had written for a script about the interactions between a wealthy man and a homeless man, the latter coming to save the formers life. From this I added parts that showed the wealthy man would learn from this and use it to become a better person mainly through the way the heat see use people and give them a chance rather than judging them.   Right now I am drafting a script in order to structure my story and I am doing brief chunks of dialogue to fill out, however much of this will probably be a changed  as I have fellow classmates and tutors look over it and show me how to improve. This is very important for writing dialogue, because you have to only include what is necessary rather than having the characters quasi-look into the camera and tell the audience what they're thinking, you have to show them this rather than express it through dialogue.